अभि सुरज नहि दुब ज़रा शाम होने दो

S.p. Singh

February 20 at 7:26pm · 

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  Puneet Chowdhary Khubsoorat

  February 20 at 7:29pm · Like
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  S.p. Singh धन्यवाद।

  February 20 at 7:32pm · Like
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  आकांक्षा रॉय nice....very good evening....

  February 20 at 7:34pm · Unlike · 1
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  BN Pandey Thoraa SAA nashaa Esame Shurur Esame Hai.. Ye HUD Lataafat Se Gujarati hi Nahi... Jo Jaam Se pi le Utar jaati Hai.. Jo Aankh Se pile Utarati Hi Nahi...

  

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  Puneet Chowdhary But one correction you should write mein khud ba khud to laut aunga mujhe kamyaab hone do. THAT SPEAKS OF YOUR GRIT.

  February 20 at 7:36pm · Unlike · 2
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  Puneet Chowdhary Pls change immediately and repost

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  Puneet Chowdhary

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  Amrendra Mishra रात आने पर हमें भी वही होना है, सिंह साहब।

  February 20 at 7:44pm · Unlike · 2
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  Ajay Jain very nice ----sab kuchh kah diya en 2 lines me --Good eve ji

  February 20 at 7:54pm · Unlike · 2
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  Ajay Kr Misra Kkoobsurat abhivaykti,
  Sam hote hi apne apne ashiyon per pahunchne ki jadojahad.
  Sunder prastuti.

  February 20 at 8:17pm · Like
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  SN Gupta अद्भुत रचना

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  Ram Saran Singh महोदय मुझे बीएन पांडे जी और पुनीत चौधरी जी की टिप्पणी बढ़िया लगी । बढ़िया रचना सर । धन्यवाद

  February 20 at 9:02pm · Unlike · 2
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  Harihar Singh बहुत सुन्दर।शुभ रात्री।

  February 20 at 9:02pm · Like · 1
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  Puneet Chowdhary Dhanshayad ram jee pehli baar shayad kissi ne itne khule shabdo mein humari tippani ki sarhana ki hai.Bahut bahut dhanywad.

  February 20 at 9:12pm · Unlike · 1
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  डॉ. रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री मयंक सुन्दर प्रस्तुति। सुप्रभात आपको।

  

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  Anil K Garg Kya Baat hai Sir ? Why this negative thought this time ?

  February 21 at 9:18am · Unlike · 1
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  S.p. Singh I got lot of attention this time from my friends. Otherwise no reason as I always carry positive mind set. Poetry takes to different moods.

  February 21 at 10:37am · Edited · Like
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  Raj Gupta बहुत सुंदर

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  Madhvi Srivastava so beautiful lines

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